April 13, 2012

Lyric Revision

Still working on the new song I posted on the 10th. I've revised the lyrics and the next step will be to add more. And eventually I'll give the music more structure and build. In any case, this is what I've got so far...
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If you can feel my beat rock your ribs, my tongue and teeth comb your winter coat,
then hold your head beneath and whisper with the earth stuck in your throat
into my withered ear the sound of your howlin' tears, singing softly,
and I will call the moon to tug your tide and make you high when you think of me.
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Once I've got more worked out with the structure of the song and more lyrics, I'll do another rough recording. But, I'm feeling pretty good about these 4 lines--so I wanted to share them.